tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4655524060892728542.post5634856147991529044..comments2013-04-11T10:02:46.928-07:00Comments on Colton English 250 Blog: Understanding the Higgs BosonAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04223629690543969428noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4655524060892728542.post-60042062773472748812013-04-11T10:02:46.928-07:002013-04-11T10:02:46.928-07:001. I can't identify a particular problem. You ...1. I can't identify a particular problem. You might want to address peoples' concerns that the world might end a little more.<br />2. There seems to be different sources. You might want to add information (if there is any) that works against the higgs boson for another point of view. <br />3. You seem to have used different sources and put them together nicely. Your essay seems pretty formal, which makes sense. <br />4. There's lots of good logos and ethos (by mentioning an organization like CERN). It makes sense to be a very logical essay. <br />5,6. You have working links to other good media. I might suggest adding more pictures because everybody loves pictures. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02272638929983382200noreply@blogger.com